Lyrics were okay, the music complemented your voice (or i guess vice-versa), and the ending fit nicely with the tone (mood?). I dunno how well this works on it own, but i could seriously see this in some sort of drug trip in a movie or something like that...
Thanks for the imput, I never get reviews.
My favorite part of this piece is the music, and I'd have no problem with someone taking it and putting better vocals/lyrics over it. And yeah, this definitely reminds me of a drug trip as well :P
A very good remix, of a classic
Hope no one is scratching their head wondering wth this is from (The nightmare before Christmas- if i'm right).
I wish i knew the full story behind this (although this song is a clear summary). I don't listen to rap, so i can't really comment on your lyrics or flow. However, i can comment (even though i kinda came after the whole "Don't beat your kids" thing) on "... a good solid beating" ...with previous experience. I get the frustration with the "new" generation, but this seems very harsh (even if there is a really good reason behind it).
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